The latest addition, "And was on stand-by, for approximately 500,000 years, when discovered by Doctors Korby and Brown" doesn't make any sense -- there is no explanation for why whoever wrote this thought it was proper to start a sentence with "and", but the end result doesn't make sense. Why not try adding a subject to the sentence and say "Ruk was on stand-by..." -- would that be a really difficult way to adjust your writing style? Also, start using punctuation correctly. -- Captain MKB 00:36, 27 December 2008 (UTC)