Talk: The Assignment

Note with unclear grammar:

The roles are reversed as far as an O'Brien family member who is not his or her self.

1st, for Miles in Power Play. And 2nd, on this occasion for Keiko.

I could rewrite this, but I'd like a chance to critique the word order here, to benefit the author. In particular, the use of subject-verb order and how many times that occurs per sentence, as well as the use of correct joining words "and" "for" "as", etc. -- Captain MKB 16:24, 6 December 2008 (UTC)